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1inamillion
11-10-2008, 12:09 PM
I won't take it anymore
Stop trying to hurt me
I won't take it anymore
Stop trying to control me
I won't take it anymore
Stop trying to break me
I won't take it anymore
Stop looking at me like that
I won't take it anymore
Stop trying to take over my life
I won't take it anymore
Stop i will fight back now
I won't take it anymore
Stop being a complete moron
I won't take it anymore
Stop telling me what to do
I won't take it anymore
STOP!! STOP!! STOP!!

I won't take it anymore!!!

Col. Mustard
11-12-2008, 03:03 PM
Very good poem, i really like it.
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1inamillion
11-13-2008, 07:05 AM
mkay thanks

Pixie Wildflower
01-15-2009, 07:42 AM
I really love your poems!