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1inamillion
08-27-2008, 07:44 AM
The door

Its waiting open
The door beckons unto me
I sit holding my pen
It calls to me 'come in'
The door is open
All I have to do
Is step through the door
All I see is blackness
I'm scared to let go
I'm scared to live
I want to embrace it all
I want to breathe it in
But i'm scared.....

Jason
08-27-2008, 07:49 AM
Me likey.

1inamillion
08-27-2008, 09:20 AM
Thanks!

onesawthelight
01-17-2009, 07:30 AM
I like it...you should write a follow up...when the door opens...I found myself thinking up the words after I read it. Only a thought!

Greg

Pixie Wildflower
02-03-2009, 02:57 PM
Beautiful work!