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RevZeek
03-15-2008, 04:03 AM
My arms around your waist
Face to face
Eye to eye
Gazing intently
Lovingly
Peering into your soul
Softly speaking
Whispering in your ear
A gentle kiss
Pure feelings
True love
Alas
Not to be
Unrequited
Simply a pipe dream

Sigh...
ChristChild
03-15-2008, 05:39 AM
The story of my life... :mad: I gave up looking.

Shane
Jason
03-15-2008, 05:42 AM
Ah, too close to home.
ausgirl
03-15-2008, 07:03 AM
Just wanted to chip in a ditto from the feminine neck of the woods!
RevZeek
03-16-2008, 08:11 PM
Thanks guys!
truster
03-23-2008, 06:34 AM
The story of my life... :mad: I gave up looking.

Shane

Same here... the story of my life thus far!
ausgirl
03-23-2008, 09:59 AM
Same here... the story of my life thus far!
Honey, you're life is only just beginning!
truster
03-24-2008, 08:11 PM
Honey, you're life is only just beginning!

Exactly, which is why I said "thus far." :)

It is true, though. I've never even been on a date (and I don't know whether to be proud or disappointed ;) )
Gandalf
03-24-2008, 09:02 PM
I would venture to suggest that the title is redundant, and true love can never be requited: if there is a requisite response, it is something less than love and retains some selfishness. Reciprocation of love is possible, but not requisition.

That observation aside, nice poem. :)
RevZeek
03-25-2008, 08:38 AM
LOL! Thanks Brian! You crack me up. :D
Pixie Wildflower
03-26-2008, 06:20 AM
Very melacholy!
ginaree
04-14-2008, 03:59 PM
perfect word, Pixie...and true!