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RevZeek
03-15-2008, 03:55 AM
No polish...straight from my pencil to you. Just wanted to share how I'm feeling right now.
-Z

Footprints
Indentations
Abuse
Scars
How long must this heart suffer?

I've been seeking
Earnestly
Honestly
Truly
Have I missed the mark?

Distraction
Frustration
Impatience
Have I operated too much in these?

Am I not prepared?
Open to hear?
Available for use?
Held back?

Held back!
By me?
By her?
By You?

Let the footprints be only Yours
Make the scars a testament
May the indentations be a receptacle
Of Your glory

I desire
You
Hope is not lost
The fight continues

Jason
03-15-2008, 05:03 AM
I really like that, Zack.

ChristChild
03-15-2008, 05:37 AM
I definitely feel this one. Nice job, Zack.

Shane

RevZeek
03-16-2008, 08:12 PM
Thanks for the kind words y'all.

Tracey
03-16-2008, 08:39 PM
wow I really like it too. I just made a post on facebook and your poem sort of corresponds with my story. Thanks for sharing

SueQ
03-18-2008, 11:53 PM
That hits the mark.

truster
03-23-2008, 06:32 AM
It's amazing how God uses the most unexpected things to speak to a person. (meaning me, not you. :) )

Very nice.

Pixie Wildflower
03-26-2008, 06:18 AM
Very poignant my son!